OMG this is amazing!! I couldn't stop giggling reading through your description of Grace and Tiffany shoving her out of the bathroom window! And WOW that ending! I love love loved this!
I can’t believe this got some genuine chuckles out of me, considering the events. This was definitely a good read with tasteful elements of comedic relief. And “poor” lil Lance had me surprised!
Stephen, that's a dark comedy #1 Netflix movie screenplay I just read. Fantastic stuff, great job!
Thanks a lot Jim. I had so many doubts the whole way through writing this one, delighted (and relieved) you enjoyed it.
Very engaging story - I enjoyed it a lot!
And that ending (along with that pun in the title 😆)!
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this ❤️
OMG this is amazing!! I couldn't stop giggling reading through your description of Grace and Tiffany shoving her out of the bathroom window! And WOW that ending! I love love loved this!
Ah thank you, Nicole! That bathroom scene might just be my favourite of all the scenes I've ever written 😆❤️
✨ Super fun story, Stephen! You're on a roll!
Thanks a lot, Sean! Honestly I had so many doubts when writing this one - so glad that I stuck with it 🙌🏻
Those always end up being my favorite stories, the ones you have to work for!
I loved this…dark and clever, I thought I was right there observing the whole thing happen. I love a good murder.
Thank you, Reda! Delighted you enjoyed it ❤️🖤
I can’t believe this got some genuine chuckles out of me, considering the events. This was definitely a good read with tasteful elements of comedic relief. And “poor” lil Lance had me surprised!
Thank you Jada! Finding the balance of humor was a real challenge, glad you found it funny! ❤️
Oh and "poor" Lance had been through a lot, that's not who he really is 😂