What's that, Nezuko? This is a thrilling start to my horror miniseries, reminding you of Stephen King's earlier work? Wow, I'm truly flattered. Thank you š
This was fantastic to read. A fun ride with some cool atmosphere. You can write action very well, which is something i struggle with a lot. For some strange reason i got some alan wake and resident evil vibes from it. Canāt wait for part 2!
Nicely done - in a short span you managed to get me routing for Vickers and hoping he wouldn't be killed. Did a great job with the entity as well...very creepy details
I love a good horror story and this is a VERY GOOD horror story. The suspense builds gradually as we are carefully given descriptions of locations amid a growing sense of dread. The forest scene was riviting and the hospital scene, and the confrontation with the 'entity,' reminded me of a scene from "Aliens." Great stuff.
NICE! made me think of "WITCH! WHO WOKE THE WITCH???" out of "left 4 dead". a lot of story and a lot of tension in a very tight package. good work! more please!
Wow! Amazing opening! Iām hooked for sure!
Thank you! And thanks for the restack š¤
Nightmare inducing! And yet, Part 2 can't come fast enough!
Thanks a lot Bill! Honestly I feel the same, taking all my will power not to release it early šš
This is superb. Such a great pace and atmosphere to it. Looking forward to part two!
Thanks a lot Nick! Part 2 coming Sunday šš»
Bravo, Stephen! Starts off with a bang. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Thanks Lyndsey! I'm genuinely excited for you guys to read the rest š¬
This is bloody brilliant!! Love it mate! Canāt wait for part twoooooooo. Nezuko approves too š±š¤
Thanks pal! And give my thanks to Nezuko as well š»
Meow meow š¾
What's that, Nezuko? This is a thrilling start to my horror miniseries, reminding you of Stephen King's earlier work? Wow, I'm truly flattered. Thank you š
š¹š¹š¹ Good job hooman. Not often do I give out compliments. Now ā¦ about that tuna ā¦
This was fantastic to read. A fun ride with some cool atmosphere. You can write action very well, which is something i struggle with a lot. For some strange reason i got some alan wake and resident evil vibes from it. Canāt wait for part 2!
Thanks Arbaaz! I can just imagine Ross & Vickers moving awkwardly through the hospital corridors like an old Resident Evil game š
Great start to this miniseries Stephen. Looking forward to Part 2. - Jim
Thanks Jim! Can't wait to share it.
Nicely done - in a short span you managed to get me routing for Vickers and hoping he wouldn't be killed. Did a great job with the entity as well...very creepy details
Thanks Tony! Part 2 coming Sunday šš»
I love a good horror story and this is a VERY GOOD horror story. The suspense builds gradually as we are carefully given descriptions of locations amid a growing sense of dread. The forest scene was riviting and the hospital scene, and the confrontation with the 'entity,' reminded me of a scene from "Aliens." Great stuff.
Thanks Sandy! And Aliens is one of my favourites. You'll learn more about "the entity" in Part 2!
NICE! made me think of "WITCH! WHO WOKE THE WITCH???" out of "left 4 dead". a lot of story and a lot of tension in a very tight package. good work! more please!
Thanks Nick! Part 2 coming Sunday šš»
masterful storytelling, I was gripped, enthralled - can't wait for the next ep.!
Thank you! š¤
Fantastic! Horrific, mysterious, and whatās up with the folks in Cinder Hollow? I am absolutely hooked!
Aww thanks Liz! This has made me very happy! ā¤ļø
you managed the incredible feat of a jump scare in written horror and you did it TWICE
Did I really? This is honestly news to me! Thank you ā¤ļø
hahah dude yes! amazing work.
Really enjoyed this Stephen. A great start šš¼
However, I demand to know what football top Vickers is wearing under his uniform š
Bumblebee 96/97 of course š¤£
The absolute best! š
Wow! I loved this! I canāt wait for Part 2!
Thanks Reda! Part 2 will answer some questions you may have, but might also give you others!