When I first started writing, I did what most new writers do: I jumped straight into the deep end with a novel. I spent months (years, actually) crafting a 70,000-word manuscript, thinking I'd created a masterpiece. But when I recently revisited it after some time away, I found something surprising: the novel was glaringly flawed.
It was over-written, waffly, and my character’s voice —while present —wasn’t distinct enough to carry the story. I’d written in first-person, present-tense, which was fine in theory but felt awkward on the page. In short, I realized I had a long way to go.
But what had changed? In between finishing the first draft of my novel and now, I took a break to write a few short stories. I wasn’t trying to level up my skills or make any profound breakthroughs — I just wanted to have fun and get my mind off the novel.
And bam! My first short story, Mama's Boy, was easily the best thing I’d ever written up to that point. My second, Model Boss, was the most fun I’d had writing anything. The third, a mini-series I’m working on now, has pushed me to create a whole world in a limited space.
Unintentionally, these short stories taught me more about writing than I ever expected. They forced me to be concise, to play with different voices and perspectives, and to challenge myself creatively in a way my novel hadn’t. Suddenly, all the problems in my novel draft became clear: it was bloated, unfocused, and needed a complete overhaul.
I realize now that stepping away from the novel wasn’t a detour — it was the key to unlocking a better version of it.
My takeaway? If you’re feeling stuck in your writing, or if you’re struggling with a bigger project like a novel, give yourself permission to experiment with short stories. You might just stumble upon the breakthrough you didn’t even know you needed. You don’t have to have it all figured out right away — sometimes, the best learning happens when you're just trying to have fun.
I've written quite a few short stories as well, and it's definitely taught me a lot too!
It's gotten to the point where I've started plotting out my longer stories as multiple short stories instead! 😆
(That's a personal preference, not a suggestion.)
For me, I think the nature of it allows me to focus a lot better on what I think is the most important parts of the story.
Glad to see another fellow writer enjoying the writing of short stories! 😄
Once upon a time I would have thought this advice cliché and total bunk. But then while working on my Freelan novel series (in progress), I was inspired by various sources online to start writing some genre short stories. Two books of these now published. More being written daily. And I am also rereading and editing my earlier Freelan work, finding a lot of areas that I can now make a lot better.